Changing the sentence
The girl ran down the road as fast as she possibly could. – Running down the road, the girl went as fast as she could.
the child was playing in the sandbox –
During the dead of night, in the wild, desert like sandbox, amongst an oasis of toys there hid a wonderstruck child and his spade, playing in tranquillity. Then all of a sudden, a thundering voice came echoing in from the dunes far away, “dinner is ready!”.
Scampering to his feet. Now awoken from the sceneity of his oasis, the boy was now thrust through to the concrete jungle of his estate where is awaiting parent stood with an offering of food. But upon the realisation of what it was, he fled the scene with an unparalleled speed. His heart racing as he dove towards the forest of grass which was his backyard, he gave everything he had to get back to his oasis and away from the threat. the threat, of vegetables.