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Animal farm: Mr. Jones locked the hen-house. Too drunk to remember shutting the pop-holes. The lanterns light danced side to side. He lurched across the yard. Kicked his boots at the door. drew a last beer. and headed to bed, where Mrs. Jones was already snoring.

Home free! : As she opened the door. She fainted. Caught mid fall by her elder sister who had been standing by her side. Looking out upon the vast garden of her estate. She noticed the figure running down the distant road, who made regular glances over his shoulder. Making it hard to recognise the man. Suddenly a shout was heard by the man. “Salut Elize”. “S-Salut Andre” responded Elize, still holding her sister. After Andre reached the bottom of the porch, he slowed his run to a walk, but as he did so he noticed Amelie. “What happened?”, asked Andre as he reached the two, grasping Amelie in his arms. “she saw you”.

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